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Black Lamb

Emotions run like frightened lambs from hungry wolves
So scared and desperate as jaws tear throats
Am I a wolf? Or am I lamb?
Sentenced to darkened wool, knowing life’s a scam

I’ll start again, a halo on my head
Show the wolves’ that lambs bite back
I’ll leave behind this fragmented flock
Leave my suffering at Death’s dock
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Comments would be appreciated, Thank you, plus i like to know what you all really think of my work...

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:iconoathkeeper3:
i think it is really good :P (as always)

I like it because from what i see, you're expressing the feeling of tearing away from the frightened emotions and fighting back. idk :P

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:damphyr:It probably has something to do with his smile. :heart:
:iconobsidian-nightfall:
:) Thank you my friend. You have interpreted this well, what you think is quite a large part of the poem but i like to put a lot into my work ^^

Thanks again...

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconoathkeeper3:
your welcome^^ and like i said, it is just what i interpreted, but im sure there is a lot more meaning then that

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:damphyr:It probably has something to do with his smile. :heart:
:iconobsidian-nightfall:
I am honoured that you think that :) I'm very happy to have you as a fan ^^

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconoathkeeper3:
lol well ya of course :) your really talented

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:damphyr:It probably has something to do with his smile. :heart:
:iconobsidian-nightfall:
Thank you very much *shy face* :p It really does mean a lot that you think that... *hugs*

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconobsidian-nightfall:
:) Thank you my friend...

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde

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