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She stands barefoot on broken glass
and precious stones,
wearing white cotton
with crumpled cuffs and collar.

Unbuttoned at the neck
and the leg,
her shirt billows with the wind,
making shapes of her silhouette
that exaggerates the size of the space
between her thighs.

Under a conifer tree
in a forest-full of them,
she feels the frost on bare breasts,
and in the black tangled length of her hair.  

Her vast dark eyes are sunken
and stare in one direction.
She swore she saw a man there
standing in the freezing wind
that turns her pink lips pale.
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*Betterthanempty Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love the second stanza. It's very strong imagery!
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~Obsidian-Nightfall Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much.
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Mood: Love *TheDarkenedBride Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
winter more than any other season is a time for fairy-tales :la:

beautiful work! :iconrosesplz:
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~Obsidian-Nightfall Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
It is indeed. Thanks very much.
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*TheDarkenedBride Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime :)
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:iconsmokedragon:
I love those last three lines. Very haunting!
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~Obsidian-Nightfall Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you do, thanks very much for saying so.
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:iconsmokedragon:
You're welcome! :D
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*lombregrise Dec 13, 2012  Professional Writer
invité ici /feat here : [link] :sun:
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Sweet.
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